what is love?
is it fire?
or air?
or water?
or earth?
what is love?
is it me?
or them?
or yourself?
or us?
what is love?
is it hate?
or condemn?
or fear?
or sadness?
am I in love?
for whom?
were us in love?
for what?
are they interfering us?
for which reason?
our God is one,,
and we have no differences,,
so why they forbid us?
..screw you, authority!
love it, welcome back…
have fun.
let us know after you are done your 18 visiting..
π
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okay,,
π
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Love is all, all is love! So really, there is no logical reason discriminating AT ALL!!
Very well expressed, my friend!! A great message here…
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yeah,,
discrimination is joy killer,,
thanks,,
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Love conquers all!
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absolutely,,
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Funny, before I read your poem, I was just thinking about love, its many definitions and aspects, and what it means in the greater scheme of things.
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love is something beyond everything,,
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Nice question you have here. π
Btw, I’m from Indonesia too. It is a pleasure to meet another Thursday Poets Rally from my own country. π
http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/03/04/spelling-check/
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ralat: Thursday Poets Rally participant maksudnya. π
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haha,,
ya,,
salam kenal!
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Love the whole poem, nice piece for the rally !
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thanks!
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I so echo your thoughts, TDJ.. I wish I knew the answers to it too, but only the questions seem to haunt! Nice take..!
Vinay @ I Rhyme Without Reason
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yeah,,
it’s haunting my mind already,,
*sigh*
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Hi jasmine, I think love is universal, and so love as one, don’t criticize, just love π good poem
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thank You,,
i am learning to love, always learning,,
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question of love in many contexts rests on all of our minds… nice read!
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questioning love is questioning many things, indeed..
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Wonderful poem…thank you for sharing.
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thank you for stopping by,,
π
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A nice piece. That elusive love…….
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thank You,,
π
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Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox
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