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darkjasm May 6, 2011 Poems, Poetry

~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

burned!

i’m dead,,

for all the lights,,

of all the lights,,

thank you!

now, if you would,,

please,,

catch me if you can,,

now that i’m dead,,

of all the lights,,

written especially for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43.

it is awarded by Jingle!


thanks Jingle and promising poets’ caffe,,


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  1. 1
    pandamoniumcat on May 6, 2011 at 2:24 pm
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    So short but hard hitting! Excellent work!

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      theDarkJasmine on May 6, 2011 at 2:35 pm
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      thank you,,
      πŸ™‚

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    Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom on May 6, 2011 at 2:30 pm
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    such emotion delivered in such short words! good job!

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:39 am
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      thank you!
      πŸ™‚

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  3. 5
    Chimnese on May 6, 2011 at 4:09 pm
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    depth and thought provoking……

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:08 am
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      thank you,,

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  4. 7
    ladynimue on May 6, 2011 at 4:28 pm
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    Right on the face ! Wonderfully done !

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:09 am
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      πŸ™‚
      thanks for the compliment,,

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    Alcina on May 6, 2011 at 5:32 pm
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    Wow…that leaves nothing for me to say..

    Pretty nice work of brain there.

    Alcina

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:10 am
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      thanks,,
      i can’t believe i’ve write that!
      lol
      πŸ™‚

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    Marlee-I Mystic on May 6, 2011 at 8:04 pm
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    Blinding death. Great piece. Kudos!

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:12 am
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      thank you…very much!

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  7. 13
    Melissa on May 6, 2011 at 9:10 pm
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    This makes me think of someone who has fallen from the grace of recognition. Once chased after, then loss of fame or whatever, no longer being sought by the paparazzi.

    I can’t imagine what it’s like having all those camera’s and lights going off in your face, being blind, yikes.

    I enjoyed your offering. Thank you for stopping by my blog.

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:13 am
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      yeah,,
      this poem is inspired by many story about stars and paparazzi.
      thanks for coming back here
      πŸ™‚

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    K. McGee on May 6, 2011 at 9:45 pm
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    Short and wonderfully thought provoking. A multi-layed piece. Well crafted.

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:14 am
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      thanks!
      πŸ˜€

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    Jingle on May 6, 2011 at 10:29 pm
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    elegant one.
    love the compactness.

    Happy Mother’s Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

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    • 18
      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:15 am
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      hi J!
      thanks for coming,,
      i enjoyed the rally much.

      happy mother’s day too

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    BUTTERFLIES OF TIME on May 7, 2011 at 12:39 am
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    Almost a relief to be dead for the lights.. Some deep feelings lie in these lines..

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:17 am
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      for the lights and of the lights
      πŸ™‚

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  11. 21
    seabell on May 7, 2011 at 12:56 am
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    A clear message to them: “catch me if you can”… Well said!

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    • 22
      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:16 am
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      yes!
      thank you,,

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  12. 23
    Isabel on May 7, 2011 at 7:35 am
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    lots of meaning in between the lines, wonderful work..

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  13. 24
    kshawnedgar on May 8, 2011 at 12:33 am
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    What’s the use/meaning of the double comma? Not sure I follow your meaning.

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:19 am
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      hi!
      i won’t make it fully stop, it implies that something had to be done after the sentence, another thought to be said, but it just can’t.
      πŸ™‚

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    dsnake1 on May 8, 2011 at 9:25 am
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    this reminds me of princess diana.. ..

    great write..

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:38 am
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      haha,,
      you got it right!
      πŸ™‚

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    Intuition on May 8, 2011 at 4:15 pm
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    Nicely written, i love the shortness of it and factual truth of death.

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:22 am
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      thanks,,
      thank you for coming here,,

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  16. 30
    mindlovemisery on May 8, 2011 at 9:55 pm
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    Lightening
    Well Done =)

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      theDarkJasmine on May 9, 2011 at 9:23 am
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      thank you
      πŸ™‚

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    it is called friend « ,,’n d hEaRt isn’T unHeaRd,, on May 9, 2011 at 8:59 am
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    […] ,,’n d hEaRt isn’T unHeaRd,, sEmUanya b’Pangkal dari Hati HomeadzeL’sinilah Ta,, apa adanyasEbUah PersahaBataN,, RSS ← ~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~ […]

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  18. 33
    Ina on May 9, 2011 at 2:46 pm
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    Good and sharp poem!

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      theDarkJasmine on May 10, 2011 at 10:32 am
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      thank you
      πŸ™‚

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    Emily Jane on May 10, 2011 at 1:30 am
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    Wow, chilling and mysterious

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      theDarkJasmine on May 10, 2011 at 10:33 am
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      whoops.. thanks! πŸ™‚

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    Ms. Queenly on May 11, 2011 at 6:57 am
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    Short, sweet, catchy and interesting. Forgive me for thinking about that earworm Lady Gaga song at the title! ^_^

    queen

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      theDarkJasmine on May 13, 2011 at 7:59 am
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      yahaa,,
      lol
      thanks!
      TDJ

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    Paul on May 11, 2011 at 7:45 pm
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    Interesting stuff to think about here. Nice job!

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      theDarkJasmine on May 13, 2011 at 8:01 am
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      thank you Paul..

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  22. 41
    Jingle on May 12, 2011 at 7:35 pm
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    Hello,
    Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
    Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
    Bless your day.
    Have fun!

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    • 42
      theDarkJasmine on May 13, 2011 at 8:14 am
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      okay J!
      πŸ™‚

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  23. 43
    poetsandall on May 12, 2011 at 9:25 pm
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    nice poem

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      theDarkJasmine on May 13, 2011 at 8:09 am
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      thankYou!

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  24. 45
    moonscribbles on May 13, 2011 at 4:24 am
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    quite an interesting poem….like it a lot πŸ™‚

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      theDarkJasmine on May 13, 2011 at 8:10 am
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      glad that you like it,,
      πŸ™‚

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  25. 47
    A.B. Thomas on May 14, 2011 at 9:48 pm
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    A very slick and sharp write!

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    theDarkJasmine on May 24, 2011 at 2:46 pm
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    thank you…

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