what is love?

is it fire?

or air?

or water?

or earth?

what is love?

is it me?

or them?

or yourself?

or us?

what is love?

is it hate?

or condemn?

or fear?

or sadness?

am I in love?

for whom?

were us in love?

for what?

are they interfering us?

for which reason?

our God is one,,

and we have no differences,,

so why they forbid us?

..screw you, authority!

About darkjasm

A woman who loves black and white but stuck in between. a Happy wife, Proud Mother, and an Operational psychologist in the making. Currently loves to write about life and what happen around it. Expect to find many random thoughts in between.

24 comments on “

  1. love it, welcome back…

    have fun.
    let us know after you are done your 18 visiting..


  2. Love is all, all is love! So really, there is no logical reason discriminating AT ALL!!
    Very well expressed, my friend!! A great message here…


  3. Love conquers all!


  4. Funny, before I read your poem, I was just thinking about love, its many definitions and aspects, and what it means in the greater scheme of things.


  5. Nice question you have here. πŸ˜‰
    Btw, I’m from Indonesia too. It is a pleasure to meet another Thursday Poets Rally from my own country. πŸ™‚



  6. Love the whole poem, nice piece for the rally !


  7. I so echo your thoughts, TDJ.. I wish I knew the answers to it too, but only the questions seem to haunt! Nice take..!

    Vinay @ I Rhyme Without Reason


  8. Hi jasmine, I think love is universal, and so love as one, don’t criticize, just love πŸ™‚ good poem


  9. question of love in many contexts rests on all of our minds… nice read!


  10. Wonderful poem…thank you for sharing.


  11. A nice piece. That elusive love…….


  12. Greetings:

    Hope all is well.

    Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
    what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
    along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

    Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

    A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    Looking forward to seeing you share.
    Respect and hugs.


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