Poems Poetry

~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

burned!

i’m dead,,

for all the lights,,

of all the lights,,

thank you!

now, if you would,,

please,,

catch me if you can,,

now that i’m dead,,

of all the lights,,

written especially for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43.

it is awarded by Jingle!


thanks Jingle and promising poets’ caffe,,


About darkjasm

A woman who loves black and white but stuck in between. a Happy wife, Proud Mother, and an Operational psychologist in the making. Currently loves to write about life and what happen around it. Expect to find many random thoughts in between.

48 comments on “~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

  1. So short but hard hitting! Excellent work!

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  2. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom

    such emotion delivered in such short words! good job!

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  3. depth and thought provoking……

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  4. Right on the face ! Wonderfully done !

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  5. Wow…that leaves nothing for me to say..

    Pretty nice work of brain there.

    Alcina

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  6. Blinding death. Great piece. Kudos!

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  7. This makes me think of someone who has fallen from the grace of recognition. Once chased after, then loss of fame or whatever, no longer being sought by the paparazzi.

    I can’t imagine what it’s like having all those camera’s and lights going off in your face, being blind, yikes.

    I enjoyed your offering. Thank you for stopping by my blog.

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  8. Short and wonderfully thought provoking. A multi-layed piece. Well crafted.

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  9. elegant one.
    love the compactness.

    Happy Mother’s Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

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  10. Almost a relief to be dead for the lights.. Some deep feelings lie in these lines..

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  11. A clear message to them: “catch me if you can”… Well said!

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  12. lots of meaning in between the lines, wonderful work..

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  13. What’s the use/meaning of the double comma? Not sure I follow your meaning.

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    • hi!
      i won’t make it fully stop, it implies that something had to be done after the sentence, another thought to be said, but it just can’t.
      πŸ™‚

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  14. this reminds me of princess diana.. ..

    great write..

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  15. Nicely written, i love the shortness of it and factual truth of death.

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  16. Lightening
    Well Done =)

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  18. Good and sharp poem!

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  19. Wow, chilling and mysterious

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  20. Short, sweet, catchy and interesting. Forgive me for thinking about that earworm Lady Gaga song at the title! ^_^

    queen

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  21. Interesting stuff to think about here. Nice job!

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  22. Hello,
    Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
    Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
    Bless your day.
    Have fun!

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  23. quite an interesting poem….like it a lot πŸ™‚

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  24. A.B. Thomas

    A very slick and sharp write!

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