~P.a.P.a.R.a.Z.z.i~

burned!

i’m dead,,

for all the lights,,

of all the lights,,

thank you!

now, if you would,,

please,,

catch me if you can,,

now that i’m dead,,

of all the lights,,

written especially for Thursday Poets Rally Week 43.

it is awarded by Jingle!


thanks Jingle and promising poets’ caffe,,


48 Comments

  1. So short but hard hitting! Excellent work!

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    1. thank you,,
      πŸ™‚

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  2. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom says:

    such emotion delivered in such short words! good job!

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    1. thank you!
      πŸ™‚

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  3. Chimnese says:

    depth and thought provoking……

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  4. ladynimue says:

    Right on the face ! Wonderfully done !

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    1. πŸ™‚
      thanks for the compliment,,

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  5. Alcina says:

    Wow…that leaves nothing for me to say..

    Pretty nice work of brain there.

    Alcina

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    1. thanks,,
      i can’t believe i’ve write that!
      lol
      πŸ™‚

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  6. Blinding death. Great piece. Kudos!

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    1. thank you…very much!

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  7. Melissa says:

    This makes me think of someone who has fallen from the grace of recognition. Once chased after, then loss of fame or whatever, no longer being sought by the paparazzi.

    I can’t imagine what it’s like having all those camera’s and lights going off in your face, being blind, yikes.

    I enjoyed your offering. Thank you for stopping by my blog.

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    1. yeah,,
      this poem is inspired by many story about stars and paparazzi.
      thanks for coming back here
      πŸ™‚

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  8. K. McGee says:

    Short and wonderfully thought provoking. A multi-layed piece. Well crafted.

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    1. thanks!
      πŸ˜€

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  9. Jingle says:

    elegant one.
    love the compactness.

    Happy Mother’s Day to Moms around you. Blessings..

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    1. hi J!
      thanks for coming,,
      i enjoyed the rally much.

      happy mother’s day too

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  10. Almost a relief to be dead for the lights.. Some deep feelings lie in these lines..

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    1. for the lights and of the lights
      πŸ™‚

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  11. seabell says:

    A clear message to them: “catch me if you can”… Well said!

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    1. yes!
      thank you,,

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  12. Isabel says:

    lots of meaning in between the lines, wonderful work..

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  13. kshawnedgar says:

    What’s the use/meaning of the double comma? Not sure I follow your meaning.

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    1. hi!
      i won’t make it fully stop, it implies that something had to be done after the sentence, another thought to be said, but it just can’t.
      πŸ™‚

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  14. dsnake1 says:

    this reminds me of princess diana.. ..

    great write..

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    1. haha,,
      you got it right!
      πŸ™‚

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  15. Intuition says:

    Nicely written, i love the shortness of it and factual truth of death.

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    1. thanks,,
      thank you for coming here,,

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  16. Lightening
    Well Done =)

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    1. thank you
      πŸ™‚

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  17. Ina says:

    Good and sharp poem!

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    1. thank you
      πŸ™‚

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  18. Emily Jane says:

    Wow, chilling and mysterious

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    1. whoops.. thanks! πŸ™‚

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  19. Ms. Queenly says:

    Short, sweet, catchy and interesting. Forgive me for thinking about that earworm Lady Gaga song at the title! ^_^

    queen

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    1. yahaa,,
      lol
      thanks!
      TDJ

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  20. Paul says:

    Interesting stuff to think about here. Nice job!

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    1. thank you Paul..

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  21. Jingle says:

    Hello,
    Appreciate your participation at poets rally,
    Please return favor to poets who are here yet you did not reach them initially,
    Bless your day.
    Have fun!

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    1. okay J!
      πŸ™‚

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  22. quite an interesting poem….like it a lot πŸ™‚

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    1. glad that you like it,,
      πŸ™‚

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  23. A.B. Thomas says:

    A very slick and sharp write!

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