Poems Poetry

minutes to midnight

….what could I say??

when d wind isn’t cooling d air anymore,,
when d star isn’t bright anymore,,
when d sky isn’t clear anymore,,

…what should I do??

if my heart is broken,,
if my tears are lessen,,
if my mind is already drown,,

…what will u do??

if I say I like u,,
if I confess that I love u,,

…hate me for loving u,,
…hate me for confessing this,,
…hate me for not even trying to wipe this feeling,,

hate me,, for closing my eyes from d reality,,
reality that “our” existence will never exist,,
reality that “we” will never be together,,

…hate me, for more than thousands reasons,,
…hate me,,
…and i’ll always love you,,

…hate me, but please don’t get away from me,,

-,,this is for  is for Thursday Poets Rally week 27,,-

About darkjasm

A woman who loves black and white but stuck in between. a Happy wife, Proud Mother, and an Operational psychologist in the making. Currently loves to write about life and what happen around it. Expect to find many random thoughts in between.

24 comments on “minutes to midnight

  1. miguel

    puisi ini punya jiwa.

    susunan kata, kalimat dan hubungan tiap bait saling menguatkan.

    saya yakin siapapun yang membacanya, terutama jika pembaca yang memiliki persoalan yang sama, dapat merasakan getaran cinta yang menyakitkan itu.

    apalagi ini kado ultah buat dia.


    tetap berkarya, ok?


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  3. way too cool,
    love your choice here..


  4. u make me smile,

    please scan the participant list and comment for a minimum 18 poets,
    of course, the more you visit, the more feedback you get..

    Happy Sunday!


  5. …what should I do??

    if my heart is broken,,
    if my tears are lessen,,
    if my mind is already drown,

    An intriguing question that needs an answer but If i will be the one to answer these questions, my answer would be like this: Rest for awhile, meditate and see the beauty of the world. Your piece is wonderful.


  6. Hey, this is fantastic


  7. Very heartfelt. Excellent entry


  8. wow! you have placed a lot of emotion in your writing i can tell…. i hope the pain will subside….take care….


  9. loved it, loving it


  10. Heartbreaking reality in this poem. Thank you for your insight.


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  12. can senese the love in despair..


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