…ada selamat ulang tahun
yang harus tiba tepat waktunya…
-Dee Lestari
counting d stars,,
in d middle of d night,,
spending time,,
just to feel alive,,
breathing deeply,,
exhale,,
inhale,,
lying on d grass,,
smelling after-rain fragrance,,
just to relieve some pain,,
aching,,
in d backbone of mine,,
wanting to disappear,,
just to be by ur side,,
i’m losing ur grip,,
i’m losing my mind,,
i’m missing u,,
right here,,
right above my chest,,
u will always there,,
Happy Birthday, my Dear Mom!
The DarkJasmine 
breath taking on this one.
well done…
you have got talent here, welcome to attend poets rally week 35, where you share your poetry and make new poetic friends…poetry awards are assigned upon completion.
let me know when you are ready.
Merry Christmas…
keep writing…
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N’dee,,,,
Mamah pasti Bahagia,,, 😀
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aamiiiin,,
thanks a’!
@Jingle: I’m Ready then,,
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I will place this in, welcome back..
have fun!
😉
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Great writing. I love your use of “d”, it really gives a voice.
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i like to use that kind of rhyme,,
thanks!
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This brought a tear. My mom’s birthday would have been today. She would have been 84. She died at 69.
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please accept my deep sympathy,,
losing is hard,,
but letting go is harder,,
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Fantastic write!
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thank youu,, 😀
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good job
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*blushed*
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Beautiful 🙂
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thanks!
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Well said!!
Nice work…
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thankYou Very much,,
😀
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Strong stuff, like the brevity with feeling
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coz i really love my mum,,
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hope you well…
Greetings!
Here is the end of the year awards 4 you, enjoy!
End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! You Are The Best!
Link a poem to our potluck today, We send blessings all the way to brighten your day!
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Hope that your mom has a lovely birthday last week…
Happy Holidays.
please vote for fellow poets if you can, you will win one vote for yourself when you vote for others..
blessings…
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Strong feeling.
Happy new year!!
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thankYou,,
for u too!
😀
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