flirt

B: she’s beautiful!

G: yes, I know…

B: she’s wonderful!

G: yes, i’m aware…

B: look, she has bright eyes!

G: absolutely…

B: Oh God, she is so gorgeous!

G: ………

…….

B: babe?

G: yes?

B: are you okay?

……

……

G: now, would you please turn your eyes to me, dear?

B: what….?

G: don’t you see my heart’s bleeding?

B : …………

…sometimes, i pretend to be casual, but for telling you the truth, i’t’s hurt-every time u turn to other girl,,

25 Comments

  1. When others see the outer shell and not your heart, does it truly matter then? That is what your piece reminded me of, thanks for the visit πŸ™‚

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    1. as for me everything’s matter,,
      thanks for visiting back,,
      πŸ™‚

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  2. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom says:

    hahaha nice one! hahaha LOL

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    1. lol
      thanks!
      πŸ˜€

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  3. Jingle says:

    playful, beautiful,

    you rocked on it.
    smiles.

    come to poets rally if you can, blessings.
    πŸ™‚

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  4. Jingle says:

    playful, beautiful,

    you rocked on it.
    smiles.

    come to poets rally if you can, blessings.
    πŸ™‚
    πŸ˜‰

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    1. thanks J!
      i kinda late for this week’s rally, ain’t I?

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  5. Becca Givens says:

    Ohhh, wandering eyes can cause such hurt!!

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  6. luna15 says:

    a story i only know too well. this was great!

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    1. we all know it too well..
      thankyou..
      πŸ™‚

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  7. Lisa says:

    Well stated. Sometimes innocent flirting can be very painful.

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  8. I still flirt, look but never touch! Nice little ditty!

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  9. C Rose says:

    Very interesting piece, i enjoyed the conversation architecture. Great write ~ Rose

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  10. Nothing wrong in flirting, if, it isn’t hurting. Then, it’s awful.
    You said it so well.

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  11. Very clever good job

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  12. kagenohime says:

    That’s so true. It’s good if both are flirting to the same girl, but if one is doing all the flirting while you stand by, it hurts. I hate that. Good poem.

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  13. meiro says:

    Nice expressions.
    Lovelly written.

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    1. thanks..
      πŸ™‚

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  14. jhpoetry says:

    I enjoyed this piece, I can really relate. to the pain of disrespect…

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    1. yes..
      it hurts so much…

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  15. clever and well thought out

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